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Okay I’ve been dressing wrong for YEARS and this finally clicked for me. I’m in Denver and honestly thought layering chunky sweaters was my thing but I always felt off somehow. The part about keeping proportions small and avoiding overwhelming the frame — that’s what I needed. I’m going to start with the cropped jacket + straight-leg trouser combo this weekend. One question though: do ankle boots with a slight heel count as “grounding” or do they break the silhoutte? Asking because I have three pairs lol.